08-26-2022, 01:22 AM
Hi Tiger,
Back again. In case my previous comment was too obscure, I find this poem to be very well done, as usual. I admire your ability to write so simply to such strong effect. I particularly like your juxtaposition of the bulldogs and "little cat fee" and the last line is brilliant. I am curious about your use of "it" as the subject in S2. I suspect you did because it relates to the dehumanization you are addressing in the poem. Anyway, really liked it.
Thanks,
bryn
Back again. In case my previous comment was too obscure, I find this poem to be very well done, as usual. I admire your ability to write so simply to such strong effect. I particularly like your juxtaposition of the bulldogs and "little cat fee" and the last line is brilliant. I am curious about your use of "it" as the subject in S2. I suspect you did because it relates to the dehumanization you are addressing in the poem. Anyway, really liked it.
Thanks,
bryn