Weight as Fate - edit, title change

[dukealien]

Hey Duke-

I'm not sure the title is working, and it's very tricky for this short one.

I'd suggest Irrefutable, as a suggestion to enhance the double entendre of "gravity".

That said, I'm intriqued by various approaches to the irony of our thinking that we can overcome the gravity of being human (hope that makes sense).

Mark
ps - I'll post one of mine in MISC that "adds weight" by a syllable per line, even as the N strives to be escape gravity.

I'm not crazy about the title, either (one).  The original, I thought, had a facile gloss to it, but when a critic actively dislikes, ya gotta do *something*.  Perhaps a replacement as simple as "Weight" could work.

Liked the stairsteps in your misc.  Comment there.