Consecrating Harmony

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Consecrated Harmony

Eager wounds express their knowledge in the dawn,
bloody
from the darkness, weary guns cry out--
noisy
forking through a desert, a frightening fight endures.
fiercely
Armies, the obscure lambs in autumn, stop, then step:
charging
The evanescent systems imploding within, truculent children immolated into
battle.

T-
Like this new version very much.  Seems a completed poem now.  Good work.

TqB