07-13-2022, 09:02 AM
Empty wounds illume their knowledge in the dawn,
bloody
Empty of blood.
from the darkness, weary guns shout--
Shout, but not shoot or shot.
noisy
Dark noisy.
Sunlight, wounds empty.
forking through a desert, a frightening fight endures.
fiercely
I see the hanging words outside the periods. I think they can as well fit between the periods.
Armies, the recondite lambs in autumn, stop, then step:
charging
I see the play of autumn youth and death, stopping, starting, and intensely charging.
The evanescent systems imploding within, most truculent children were immolating off
to war.
All this is/was evanescent. Not bad. Not exactly novice, as this section of the forum used to be called.
To war anyway. The most truculent.
bloody
Empty of blood.
from the darkness, weary guns shout--
Shout, but not shoot or shot.
noisy
Dark noisy.
Sunlight, wounds empty.
forking through a desert, a frightening fight endures.
fiercely
I see the hanging words outside the periods. I think they can as well fit between the periods.
Armies, the recondite lambs in autumn, stop, then step:
charging
I see the play of autumn youth and death, stopping, starting, and intensely charging.
The evanescent systems imploding within, most truculent children were immolating off
to war.
All this is/was evanescent. Not bad. Not exactly novice, as this section of the forum used to be called.
To war anyway. The most truculent.