Vitality
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Maybe to us it is, but to death it's just another body counting up. It doesn't matter how you die, because you end up in the same place anyways. It is a little interesting the ways you can be killed before death, but that's just another gimick of life.

The trail begins at a point and wavers off course, but eventually connects to the other point, and the thread tightens.

you could do without the 'ever'
also the horizon bit seems boring, could you find another way to describe looming clouds?
I use horizon when I'm lazy, maybe the credits transfer.
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Vitality - by rowens - 06-26-2022, 11:26 PM
RE: Vitality - by Semicircle - 06-27-2022, 01:33 AM
RE: Vitality - by rowens - 06-27-2022, 02:15 AM
RE: Vitality - by Semicircle - 06-27-2022, 02:40 AM



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