A walk in the park
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(06-25-2022, 10:12 PM)rowens Wrote:  The abstract kindness and lurking set an interesting tone.

The evil shirks lines, unless you're easily affected by rhymes and words, can turn people away who now expect more throwaway lines.

Shadows do far more interesting things in the vicinity of street lamps than dash. They can.


Cold dust is an image you can feel.
thanks for the advice, that poem could've been a stinker. I've revised my work.
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A walk in the park - by Semicircle - 06-25-2022, 12:31 PM
RE: A walk in the park - by rowens - 06-25-2022, 10:12 PM
RE: A walk in the park - by Semicircle - 06-26-2022, 11:41 AM
RE: A walk in the park - by rowens - 06-26-2022, 11:31 PM



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