Black on Bone White

[Mark A Becker]

Black on Bone White 

At dusk, black wasps
swarm a hanging basket
filled with deer antlers 
and the skeleton of a fawn.

Hey Tim,
Maybe "Black On Bone WHite" could be the title. ??

"the skeleton of a fawn."
This line added, I think, and I was sorry to see it cut.  It could be the last line of the poem, as the new replacements have much less impact.

As you know, I'm a big fan of short poem/observations.

Mark