Assateague Island
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(06-03-2022, 03:01 AM)Mark A Becker Wrote:  Sunday, early Spring-
morning opens like a rose,
  welcoming the sun.
...

  An afternoon stroll-
wild ponies crossing the marsh
  by loblolly pines.
...

  Sun beaming through trees
as our shadows stretch eastward,
  tall grass waves good-bye.
...

  Shadows enhancing
what a body’s language for-
  waltzing with the moon.
These could almost be four separate poems.  

I do trip over "what a body's language for" everytime I read it.

If it was 4 poems, my far favorites would be 2 and 3.
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Assateague Island - by Mark A Becker - 06-03-2022, 03:01 AM
RE: Asateague Island - by TranquillityBase - 06-03-2022, 08:27 AM
RE: Asateague Island - by Mark A Becker - 06-04-2022, 02:05 AM
RE: Asateague Island - by Tiger the Lion - 06-03-2022, 08:37 AM
RE: Assateague Island - by TranquillityBase - 06-04-2022, 10:08 AM
RE: Assateague Island - by Mark A Becker - 06-04-2022, 10:29 PM
RE: Assateague Island - by brynmawr1 - 06-06-2022, 05:31 AM
RE: Assateague Island - by brynmawr1 - 06-04-2022, 12:44 PM



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