05-28-2022, 01:15 AM
(05-24-2022, 10:14 PM)TranquillityBase Wrote: CannabisTqB,
Under the contract
every third day I’m allowed to visit the clouds
where perception is a mirror and Devas dance for a quarter.
My keeper, she holds the tickets to the door
of my tin shack Nirvana. I don't think you need to be specific here
She also holds the secrets of chopping wood, drawing water. Maybe something like "where I search for" or "where I practice"
She is my tether against becoming lost
to the sky and to her for too long.
The contract is my surrender to a 40 year love,
to the keeper, and to the before and after.
I've made some additional suggestions in the middle where it feels a little awkward. I wrote out some of my ideas but you know what you are looking for.
best,
bryn
PS thanks for your comment on Daffodils.

