The Contract (now Cannabis)
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(05-28-2022, 12:35 AM)brynmawr1 Wrote:  [quote="TranquillityBase" pid='259790' dateline='1653398084']
Cannabis

Under the cannabis contract,                                  I feel like the title can do the work here 
every third day, I’m allowed to visit the clouds
where perception is a mirror and Devas dance for a quarter.        Divas?
The keeper, she holds the tickets to my tin Nirvana,                My Keeper?             door?
the secrets of chopping wood, drawing water.
She guards me against becoming untethered               She is my tether against being(becoming)...
lost to the sky and to her for too long a time.
The contract is my surrender to a 40 year old love,
to the keeper, and to the before and after.


Ah!  Funny how the poem might work both ways, drugs or internet.  Maybe there is a poem somewhere about that.  I have posted some general comments above.
bryn
Thanks again Bryn.  Devas are "celestial beings who share the god-like characteristics of being more powerful, longer-lived, and, in general, much happier than humans, although the same level of veneration is not paid to them as to Buddhas."  But I made the other edits that you suggest.
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Messages In This Thread
The Contract (now Cannabis) - by TranquillityBase - 05-24-2022, 10:14 PM
RE: The Contract - by brynmawr1 - 05-25-2022, 12:45 AM
RE: The Contract - by Mark A Becker - 05-25-2022, 05:45 AM
RE: The Contract - by TranquillityBase - 05-25-2022, 09:00 AM
RE: The Contract - by brynmawr1 - 05-27-2022, 12:46 PM
RE: The Contract - by TranquillityBase - 05-27-2022, 11:38 PM
RE: The Contract (now Cannabis) - by brynmawr1 - 05-28-2022, 12:35 AM
RE: The Contract (now Cannabis) - by TranquillityBase - 05-28-2022, 12:46 AM
RE: The Contract (now Cannabis) - by brynmawr1 - 05-28-2022, 01:15 AM
RE: The Contract (now Cannabis) - by brynmawr1 - 06-03-2022, 12:37 PM



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