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Andy Kaufman

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05-27-2022, 05:06 AM

People never go anywhere in your poems. That's another something you could go with. The settings seem to change, the people seem to leave, but they don't. Even when they do.

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Palm tree beach - by Semicircle - 05-10-2022, 12:37 AM

RE: Palm tree beach - by rowens - 05-27-2022, 05:06 AM

RE: Palm tree beach - by Semicircle - 05-31-2022, 09:52 AM

RE: Palm tree beach - by Mark A Becker - 05-27-2022, 05:35 AM

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