The Report

[Mark A Becker]

Hey Paul- suggestions, below:

The Report

in compromised light hmm?? "compromised" just doesn't seem like the right word. Why not simply  "in darkness"?
pointing fingers
look like cocked pistols

is prudence meant I think you need a stronger ending.  The enjambment on "meant" isn't working for me. I think that "meant" is not adding anything here.
to wait for dawn?

I have a feel for what yer going for, but this short one needs more punch- "pointing fingers/cocked pistols" provides the necessary kernel.

Thanks for showing up,
Mark