05-26-2022, 11:04 AM
(05-26-2022, 02:30 AM)Semicircle Wrote: text ended up small in an area,what about changing the title, getting "photograph" in there somewhere? If that is what you want people to get.
what I was trying to convey was the main character looking through photos
and flicking them into the fire.
i had a very different vision when reading the poem, involving skulls on a fire.