05-25-2022, 01:22 PM
(05-24-2022, 10:16 PM)Mark A Becker Wrote: Hey- you could easily go completely 'syllabic', with three, three syllable lines, with commas for the tripped up effect, with a little indent at the third line to add to it. I also threw in a colon after 3am, for separation (hesitation). I'm fascinated by what a bit of punctuation, and nine simple syllables can do...I like it Mark
3am:
drunk, doorstep,
seeing stars
It has been added to the list. I'm pleased with the way this one has evolved
wae aye man ye radgie