Storied Lines(prev untitled) edit
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Hi Bryn-
Without changing a word, all I have is subtraction, and an arrangement in 4 quasi-couplets:


Black lines scar white
concrete, in angles.

Evidence
of lives intersected.

Squealing tires
felt in the gut.

Was the violence only of words?
Lines on the road keep secrets.
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Storied Lines(prev untitled) edit - by brynmawr1 - 05-25-2022, 04:06 AM
RE: untitled - by Mark A Becker - 05-25-2022, 05:59 AM
RE: untitled - by brynmawr1 - 05-25-2022, 10:24 AM
RE: untitled - by TranquillityBase - 05-25-2022, 08:57 AM
RE: Storied Lines(prev untitled) - by dukealien - 05-28-2022, 04:43 AM
RE: Storied Lines(prev untitled) - by brynmawr1 - 05-28-2022, 09:28 AM
RE: Storied Lines(prev untitled) edit - by Miley - 06-05-2022, 04:10 PM



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