3am

[Mark A Becker]

Hey- you could easily go completely 'syllabic', with three, three syllable lines, with commas for the tripped up effect, with a little indent at the third line to add to it. I also threw in a colon after 3am, for separation (hesitation). I'm fascinated by what a bit of punctuation, and nine simple syllables can do... 

3am:
drunk, doorstep,
      seeing stars