3am

[Magpie]

HA! - I love the latest version, and thanks to Duke for getting ya on to it- gives a whole different spin to early morning stars. I don't think it's what you originally intended, but it does open this one up to interesting interpretations.

Thanks Mark, I'm loving it too, I've posted both versions up top - plus another thought

I was just trying to be as minimal as possible so I'd be lying if I said it was my original intention - but hey we're all poets here so...

It was most definitely my original intention