Dispersion

[Magpie]

The land of the lost and lonely -- too many 'the'
was home to all rejects,
but some couldn't fit in.
They created their own lands, -- better word choice than 'lands'? to avoid repetition 
and somewhere down the line, -- cliche 
we all ended up alone again. -- i know what you're trying to do here with 'the reveal' but change from 'they' to 'we' doesn't                                                 work for me 

I feel that you could make the first stanza read less clumsily and more poetic

Land of lost and lonely
home to all rejects,  etc...

cheers for the read
mark