Vitreous glance

Vitreous glance

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05-20-2022, 12:02 AM

Really like this one SC. Great title.

My only quibble is why did you take "their" out of second line? I read it as your eyes until I got to second line, so I was a bit confused.

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Vitreous glance - by Semicircle - 05-18-2022, 11:26 PM

RE: Vitreous - by Magpie - 05-19-2022, 12:21 AM

RE: Vitreous glance - by Magpie - 05-19-2022, 03:46 AM

RE: Vitreous glance - by Semicircle - 05-19-2022, 03:49 AM

RE: Vitreous glance - by TranquillityBase - 05-20-2022, 12:02 AM

RE: Vitreous glance - by Semicircle - 05-20-2022, 01:09 AM

RE: Vitreous glance - by Magpie - 05-20-2022, 01:19 AM

RE: Vitreous glance - by Semicircle - 05-20-2022, 01:23 AM

RE: Vitreous glance - by brynmawr1 - 05-20-2022, 02:36 AM

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