La Lune
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It's perfect Mark.

I like the internal rhyme that also rhymes with the title.
I was up at 4am to see it however it was cloudy, but this makes up for it.

Cheers for the read
Mark
feedback award wae aye man ye radgie
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La Lune - by Mark A Becker - 05-16-2022, 12:56 PM
RE: La Lune - by Magpie - 05-16-2022, 06:20 PM
RE: La Lune - by Mark A Becker - 05-17-2022, 05:39 AM



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