Old Shoes edit

[brynmawr1]

Thank you all for taking the time to read and comment. I like the still life angle making it cleaner. The thought behind my version is the idea that a life can look/be tattered and worn from the outside but those marks tell our story and often that which looks most worn is also the most comfortable. Layered on that is the idea that it's nice to go through that with a partner, hence the point of the last stanza. That said, I have always felt that if you have to explain yourself then something isn't working. I'll keep trying!

Thanks again.