Innocence
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RiverNotch,

It is supposed to be iambic pentameter, but instead it keeps lapsing in trochee.

Thank you Duke, SC and TB for your suggestion. I would respond in depth, but I currently have the stomach flu and am not feeling up to it. Will respond later.

dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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Innocence - by Erthona - 05-05-2022, 06:25 PM
RE: Innocence - by Semicircle - 05-06-2022, 12:29 AM
RE: Innocence - by RiverNotch - 05-06-2022, 01:15 AM
RE: Innocence - by TranquillityBase - 05-06-2022, 01:21 AM
RE: Innocence - by dukealien - 05-06-2022, 04:20 AM
RE: Innocence - by Erthona - 05-06-2022, 10:40 PM



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