05-05-2022, 06:11 PM
TB,
"Egyptian" seems unnecessary as it conjures images unrelated to the poem, thus unnecessarily disrupting the reading of the poem.
It is the best version and very concise. I applaud this version.
best,
dale
"Egyptian" seems unnecessary as it conjures images unrelated to the poem, thus unnecessarily disrupting the reading of the poem.
It is the best version and very concise. I applaud this version.
best,
dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.