05-02-2022, 06:28 AM
Semicircle,
The first part is not too bad, but I think you could do without the last to lines and for especially the last line makes no sense. Instead of
"of his insanity"
"regarding his insanity"
I think it smooths out the line.
I like the double entendre with the butterfly.
best,
dale
The first part is not too bad, but I think you could do without the last to lines and for especially the last line makes no sense. Instead of
"of his insanity"
"regarding his insanity"
I think it smooths out the line.
I like the double entendre with the butterfly.
best,
dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.