05-01-2022, 02:04 AM
(05-01-2022, 01:51 AM)Mark A Becker Wrote: Watching Your Languageno need for the "the" just slows down the punch.
the truth is where
the truth lies-
a language spoken
with your eyes.
I like the "truth is where truth lies" but it is kind of a played out concept. "We are what we eat" yadda yadda. I think it can be forgiven for this small piece, I just wanted to point it out.
I thouroughly enjoy these small poems with a clear message. They have a great impact.
Erthona did one about wisdom bought with coins of pain, or something to that nature.
Little mantras that you can remember easily.
Keep em' coming
sc.