NaPM 18 April 2022
#3
That "Peter Paul" thing was clever, I have to say,
even though it was technically a pun; although,
I'm not sure if a pun is appropriate for the subject matter
even though it would be a shame to get rid of it.
If this was a more lighthearted poem it would work
but it seems a bit jarring for me.


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Francis Bacon- The Black Tryptichs





He's dead there
and I left him
hunched over
the toilet.

I am the abuser;
I thought I was
incapable,
but he's dead:
I killed him.

I am a masochist
but I realize now,
to become corrupted,
you must be a sadist as well.

Though, I did not revel in his pain,
I did to my own,
when he died.
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NaPM 18 April 2022 - by RiverNotch - 04-17-2022, 10:00 PM
RE: NaPM 18 April 2022 - by Magpie - 04-17-2022, 10:40 PM
RE: NaPM 18 April 2022 - by Semicircle - 04-18-2022, 05:30 AM
RE: NaPM 18 April 2022 - by Magpie - 04-19-2022, 12:12 AM
RE: NaPM 18 April 2022 - by Magpie - 04-19-2022, 03:45 AM
RE: NaPM 18 April 2022 - by Semicircle - 04-19-2022, 03:49 AM
RE: NaPM 18 April 2022 - by CRNDLSM - 04-18-2022, 07:58 AM
RE: NaPM 18 April 2022 - by dukealien - 04-18-2022, 10:38 AM
RE: NaPM 18 April 2022 - by RiverNotch - 04-19-2022, 02:13 AM
RE: NaPM 18 April 2022 - by Mark A Becker - 04-19-2022, 03:42 AM
RE: NaPM 18 April 2022 - by TranquillityBase - 04-19-2022, 04:15 AM



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