04-09-2022, 12:25 PM
(04-09-2022, 11:51 AM)Xlateralus Wrote:It's not hard to piss off poetry people,(04-09-2022, 07:42 AM)Semicircle Wrote:Probably not reborn, he is dead. Good call.(04-09-2022, 03:09 AM)Xlateralus Wrote: Jim died last Tuesday,Jim must be a pretty stinky guy to always smell like death.
but it could have been any particular day
He wasn’t very particular about life he said
“I’ve seen it all” which from my point of view
was odd.
A lonesome 35 year old line cook left a lot on the linen.
jim died last tuesday but his stench was reborn today
a bloated mess on a sheetless mattress
I don't think reborn is the word you're looking for,
small nitpick.
Also I read elsewhere you are pissing people off (only soft core pissing don’t worry). So thusly I am a fan of you. Cheers.
they are very sensitive.
I know this because the other day
someone called me an idiot,
so I pulled out my large quill pen
and wrote a poem about abuse
with my own blood.
I wrote it on wax paper though,
so it all just washed off when I picked it up.

