Full Rewrites

[Magpie]

I try to do a critique as helpful as possible and try to not rewrite as much as i can. I don't mind people offering alternative words for my poem as i'll always feel as though it's my poem. Advice on things like line breaks and enjambment is invaluable for me and i take it all on board. I suppose essentially if the poet can still consider it their poem after a critique then certain suggestions are fine. 

I don't really recall seeing any 'full' rewrites on here
and i know i haven't done any myself 
but if anyone thinks that i've gone too far
then let me know, i'll take it on board.

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