The Oddity of Existence
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(03-25-2022, 08:58 AM)Wavey Wrote:  We are all vessels of broken and faded memories,  gyrating in a motion picture I'm having a hard time imagining gyrating , surrounded by people people as vessels, or are the people different from the vessels,  playing as extras in this movie we call reality in order to keep us apart from the greatest secret of all...The moment you're living in now is only a dream because years from now dream years or motion picture years or reality years, when you look back, you'll question if those moments ever existed or you'll forget about them completely which means that it never happened. 
While I don't agree with the closing statement I can't argue it, the flow is dreamy and I like that, but if you used line breaks you could emphasize pauses, it's easier to control the wrap around if the font resizes, I like the theme and would like to read more like this, 
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The Oddity of Existence - by Wavey - 03-25-2022, 08:58 AM
RE: Casting Call - by CRNDLSM - 03-25-2022, 09:02 AM
RE: Casting Call - by Wavey - 03-25-2022, 09:11 AM
RE: The Oddity of Existence - by Magpie - 03-25-2022, 04:20 PM
RE: The Oddity of Existence - by CRNDLSM - 03-26-2022, 09:47 AM
RE: The Oddity of Existence - by Erthona - 03-27-2022, 05:06 PM



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