03-24-2022, 03:09 AM
(07-20-2020, 02:41 AM)adillweed Wrote: I can look through you like glass, Uncreative simile
Or spend all my time
Imagining pictures in all of your smudges.
But in the end
I'm always more mesmerized by the scenery
And know there are windows and buildings out there
Much more beautiful than you.
I'm no good with anything fragile;
It's bound to break beneath my feet. Rework this line
Does this make me heartless? Why crossed out?
I really don't know.
(I'm a bit unfamiliar with when punctuation is necessary or what would be most influential rather than just line breaks. I'm also unsure if I even want to keep the last two lines. When I was writing I was more so journaling and I don't think it flows well. Thanks for reading!!)