a simple plea

[Knot]

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Hi TqB.

I appreciate the sentiment.  Perhaps change the order?  The first verse makes the rest feel largely irrelevant.


my dog barks incessantly
at the Egyptian geese

who’ve shown up to fill the void
my wife doesn’t seem concerned

she just wants me to be happy
is this how things are supposed to end?

if so, then that’s okay
but a little definition would be nice

I've misplaced my life
if you find it, please

return it, maybe
these night sweats will stop


Best, Knot

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