Cinquains
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Hi Phillip,
enjoyed the read.


Wondered if it might be worth switching the order of the verses, as the last two lines of S1 are very strong (less so S2)?


Best, Knot


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Cinquains - by philip - 12-20-2020, 05:01 AM
RE: Cinquains - by Semicircle - 03-16-2022, 12:50 AM
RE: Cinquains - by Knot - 03-19-2022, 12:50 AM



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