03-19-2022, 12:50 AM
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Hi Phillip,
enjoyed the read.
Wondered if it might be worth switching the order of the verses, as the last two lines of S1 are very strong (less so S2)?
Best, Knot
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Hi Phillip,
enjoyed the read.
Wondered if it might be worth switching the order of the verses, as the last two lines of S1 are very strong (less so S2)?
Best, Knot
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