03-12-2022, 02:10 PM
(10-30-2019, 11:37 PM)Pinprick Wrote: IsolationI feel like most of the words in this poem
My mind’s desolation
Lost in translation
Hypnotic contemplation
Isolation
Perpetual frustration
Manic desperation
Slum city nation
Isolation
Particle deprivation
Overdose vacation
Relapse relocation
Isolation
My only destination
False proclamation
No emancipation
Isolation
Brain restoration
Idea immigration
Cortex complication
Isolation
are just filler.
I suggest not repeating isolation
after each stanza, maybe just at the beginning and end
would work better.
Thanks for the read,
best SC.

