03-04-2022, 12:29 AM
I don't think it would be a bad idea to remove that stanza as it does create questions.
I do think it wouldn't hurt to name some of the icons that survived in your final stanza, or maybe describe your reaction to them. As I said before, a little more about his art would be good for the poem.
Interesting that they survived but the bells did not.
I do think it wouldn't hurt to name some of the icons that survived in your final stanza, or maybe describe your reaction to them. As I said before, a little more about his art would be good for the poem.
Interesting that they survived but the bells did not.