02-27-2022, 02:12 AM
Hi Semi,
I don't have a line by line critique for you. I will say my favorite lines are ll.8-9.
I have one comment. My wife is a quilter, and I think your poem needs a line or two emphasizing just how much time a quilt takes. As in a LONG time. Your poem as it stands makes it sound like it can be done quickly, at least to my reading of it.
TqB
I don't have a line by line critique for you. I will say my favorite lines are ll.8-9.
I have one comment. My wife is a quilter, and I think your poem needs a line or two emphasizing just how much time a quilt takes. As in a LONG time. Your poem as it stands makes it sound like it can be done quickly, at least to my reading of it.
TqB