02-23-2022, 12:59 AM
edit;
Spring’s unstealthy early
warm wild winds
wound Winter mortally
pale darkness seems to seep
through blinds and bleeds
out hoarded health
leaving us listless
vainly awaiting Easter which
too many will not reach
Thanks to both critics. I've tried to dilute the purple phrases in this edit as well as sustain a theme which terminates at the end. Late winter malaise, anyone?
Spring’s unstealthy early
warm wild winds
wound Winter mortally
pale darkness seems to seep
through blinds and bleeds
out hoarded health
leaving us listless
vainly awaiting Easter which
too many will not reach
Thanks to both critics. I've tried to dilute the purple phrases in this edit as well as sustain a theme which terminates at the end. Late winter malaise, anyone?
Non-practicing atheist


