02-18-2022, 08:57 AM
Hey Semi. It's helpful if you post your edits above or below the original. It helps us to see the progression of the poem as you take on suggestions. Further to that, not every edit is an improvement, and it's nice for both the OP and the readers to double back. First drafts often carry an element of charm than can easily be lost - even as the poem as a whole improves.
Love Letter (original)
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Love Letter (1st Edit)
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Love Letter (2nd Edit)
...and so on
Just a suggestion.
Love Letter (original)
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Love Letter (1st Edit)
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Love Letter (2nd Edit)
...and so on
Just a suggestion.