Love Letter
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(02-18-2022, 08:11 AM)Semicircle Wrote:  It'd be interesting to see what your take on this isĀ 
Missing period after "gave"

Missing period after "them"

Not a fan of "etched".

Watch your punctuation. All of the elements matter, especially in short ones.

That's my take. The Idea needs to be yours.
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Love Letter - by Semicircle - 02-17-2022, 09:31 AM
RE: Love Letter - by Mark A Becker - 02-17-2022, 11:49 PM
RE: Love Letter - by Semicircle - 02-18-2022, 02:02 AM
RE: Love Letter - by Mark A Becker - 02-18-2022, 04:40 AM
RE: Love Letter - by Semicircle - 02-18-2022, 08:11 AM
RE: Love Letter - by Mark A Becker - 02-18-2022, 08:23 AM
RE: Love Letter - by Tiger the Lion - 02-18-2022, 08:57 AM



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