01-22-2022, 05:59 AM
Hey duke-
I'm not a fan of haiku/senryu titles.
"opens" was the correct choice, but the other words, not so much. Pink-red splotch on bruised mauve sunrise is redundant, stretching to fill the syllable count.
There's only so much that can happen in 17 syllables, making each of them count that much more.
I have as much trouble as the next person trying to write these.
Mark
I'm not a fan of haiku/senryu titles.
"opens" was the correct choice, but the other words, not so much. Pink-red splotch on bruised mauve sunrise is redundant, stretching to fill the syllable count.
There's only so much that can happen in 17 syllables, making each of them count that much more.
I have as much trouble as the next person trying to write these.
Mark