Writing poetry
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Thanks, TqB
I only like the last line
The rest is a cliche ridden pile of deadwood

I went through a creative phase sometime ago and words were coming to me naturally. Now they come in fits and bursts. It’s all part of the cycle.

Fits and bursts is also hackneyed
My next post will be about the arsenic content of certain copper concentrates….or taxes in Lesotho
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Writing poetry - by busker - 01-20-2022, 04:00 AM
RE: Writing poetry - by TranquillityBase - 01-20-2022, 08:53 AM
RE: Writing poetry - by busker - 01-20-2022, 10:48 AM
RE: Writing poetry - by Mark A Becker - 01-20-2022, 11:32 AM



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