Winter Solstice

[CRNDLSM]

There is very compelling imagery throughout this.  I'm stumbling through the grammar and I'm not sure if that's what I like about it.

The Longest Night

(No warn) of (soul’s wrestle) in the longest night no warning?  Wrestle is just an odd noun, it's interesting though 
This unified celebration of the shortest day
In anticipation (for ease) and (child’s play light) of ease? Play-light? Very abstract
is to refuse the work
(Like cold mother), her baby, in wail and need
is the denial of demons
Who take off their stiletto and unwind their hair iim taking this as the stiletto line is the cold mother, which is like the baby, which is the denial of the demon which is the demon which is the mother...  So a little confusion in the phrasing
To show they are also fragile in this terror I like this line

Alone
Moon holds a gaze and gifts (attentive suspire) “My sweet friend, I know” 
I love the words, they're just odd, is suspire a noun or verb? Does suspire describe the gift, the moon, or both, it's compelling
“You can collapse (in shatter) and bone,
And give in 

Surrender your cherish cherished?
And let hungry wolves feast on your most precious organs
Not because you have given up
But because they have chosen you iinteresting

It’s oft that demons hail
And spew into the most important aspects of your life like cold mothers

Where they steep in your skin
Speak your tongue cool, like speak your language, or as a demon actually using your tongue
Turn your eyes into glass
As you try to grasp someone you need
But leak your worms and rot
where they can no longer sympathise”

But this was the longest night

It’s okay to lose 
It’s okay to cripple
As it’s okay to accept the long aftermath it's okay is kinda weak, I see a bunch more coming up

It’s okay to be deranged
And It’s okay to be disordered
When life has snapped in tangle and bite repetition is alright, it's okay must be an  important thought

It’s okay to take off your hat and clothes
And show (rib and spine) to the strong
And be your worms worms that leak out, be yourself

For you have just wrestled the
incomprehensible
To soothe more (formed and known) iim not sure, pretty abstract, maybe a little preachy

To know thyself and dance all corners of the soul
As you honour to be the whole of what God truly loves

Thanks for sharing!