The Mess Before Christmas

The Mess Before Christmas

Tiger the Lion Offline

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12-11-2021, 01:29 PM

Enjoyed the additions, Mark. I think a more consistent meter would help it read more festivly. The lines that are 8/6/8/6 read the best for me.
Feel free to post your challenge in a separate thread. Sounds like a fun exercise.

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The Mess Before Christmas - by Mark A Becker - 12-09-2021, 04:00 AM

RE: A Christmas Mess - by Tiger the Lion - 12-09-2021, 02:03 PM

RE: A Christmas Mess - by Knot - 12-10-2021, 12:10 AM

RE: A Christmas Mess - by Mark A Becker - 12-10-2021, 10:49 AM

RE: A Christmas Mess - by Knot - 12-10-2021, 11:07 PM

RE: A Christmas Mess - by Mark A Becker - 12-11-2021, 01:26 AM

RE: The Mess Before Christmas - by Tiger the Lion - 12-11-2021, 01:29 PM

RE: The Mess Before Christmas - by Namyh - 01-24-2022, 01:42 AM

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