10-22-2021, 07:28 AM
Mark,
Thank you for the feedback! Made some heavy changes concerning the poem's line breaks and would like to know if that clears up any of the reading issues. I did take your advice on the repeated lines, but then I altered the line breaks and was wondering if that would work instead.
Alex
Thank you for the feedback! Made some heavy changes concerning the poem's line breaks and would like to know if that clears up any of the reading issues. I did take your advice on the repeated lines, but then I altered the line breaks and was wondering if that would work instead.
Alex