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A Ghastly London Night
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10-14-2021, 05:01 AM
Probably better to lay off the archaic language without first having at least a loose grasp of it. It's a pretense anyway and its contrast with the modern theme of the poem isn't really justified. The first few lines suggest an ear for meter but it soon dissolves. I would try it without the old english and more tightly focused on meter.
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A Ghastly London Night - by FrenchToast - 10-13-2021, 10:08 PM
RE: A Ghastly London Night - by Knot - 10-13-2021, 10:40 PM
RE: A Ghastly London Night - by busker - 10-14-2021, 02:31 AM
RE: A Ghastly London Night - by Tiger the Lion - 10-14-2021, 05:01 AM
RE: A Ghastly London Night - by FrenchToast - 10-14-2021, 07:12 AM
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