10-09-2021, 06:29 AM
Hey duke-
I'm interested to see how others will interpret this one.
The two words that drove my interpretation were "robotics" and "war".
If they are omitted, like below, the piece loses its meaning:
"...."
In three-sided "...."
animal, plant, mineral–
minerals winning.
Below I've substituted for those words. Is it a completely different piece now?
AI
three-sided struggle–
animal, plant, mineral–
minerals winning.
Also, while I'm not a fan of titles for haiku or senryu, this poem needs the title.
MArk
I'm interested to see how others will interpret this one.
The two words that drove my interpretation were "robotics" and "war".
If they are omitted, like below, the piece loses its meaning:
"...."
In three-sided "...."
animal, plant, mineral–
minerals winning.
Below I've substituted for those words. Is it a completely different piece now?
AI
three-sided struggle–
animal, plant, mineral–
minerals winning.
Also, while I'm not a fan of titles for haiku or senryu, this poem needs the title.
MArk