09-29-2021, 09:07 AM
I think you have an imagination that words cannot yet contain.
The end shows you know the rhythm of how to end a poem. But it comes off as though you're going too fast.
I don't know.
You may know what you're doing.
But I say:
Try drawing out sentences. The repetitive sentence fragments are holding you back.
The end shows you know the rhythm of how to end a poem. But it comes off as though you're going too fast.
I don't know.
You may know what you're doing.
But I say:
Try drawing out sentences. The repetitive sentence fragments are holding you back.