Go-No-Go

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Hi Tqb,
firstly, no idea what this is about (and it frequently seems more prose than poetry - assuming that means anything) and secondly (as usual) the title's no help and doesn't draw me in. But hey, that's me,

Hi Knot,

I know explaining is a no-no, but it's about the apocalypse, and construction is based on the Book of Revelations.  Each section is inspired by a chapter of that book.  So I'm about half way through the chapters.  Which is what makes it unfinished.

Thanks for the section by section notes.  I will take those into account as I revisit this.  I think first I need to get to an ending.

TqB