09-27-2021, 02:50 PM
(09-27-2021, 11:59 AM)rowens Wrote: The last word of the poem could be again in the stead of more.Burbling is an apt word, maybe I'll shoehorn that into my poem.
Your poems appear to work through progressions. A cyclical mix.
Body. World. Dare?, Society.
A kind of incongruent digestion. Burbling up the reflux.
A headache on the street. Cloverfield.
Tell me if I'm wrong.
I build my stories from the ground up, without any strict structural guide, so each stanza has somewhat of a stage leading to another as I build my frankenstein creation.

