Cut Dawn
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Cut Dawn


Wounded sky seeps red
on slit silk cloud-kimono
sun-slain night expires.



Too much metaphor for a real haiku.  But, you know, we always talk about day dying in the west and maybe a little about nightfall - let's have a little sympathy for night dying in the east, OK?  It's pretty, too.
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Cut Dawn - by dukealien - 09-18-2021, 04:14 AM
RE: Cut Dawn - by Tiger the Lion - 09-18-2021, 12:22 PM
RE: Cut Dawn - by Mark A Becker - 09-23-2021, 01:25 AM
RE: Cut Dawn - by busker - 09-26-2021, 08:27 AM



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