Reconnecting
#3
I agree 1/2 with Busker, but think just stanza 2 should go.  S. 3 adds some detail about that Father/God, and about the narrator.
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Reconnecting - by Tiger the Lion - 08-31-2021, 02:44 PM
RE: Reconnecting - by busker - 09-03-2021, 08:17 PM
RE: Reconnecting - by TranquillityBase - 09-03-2021, 08:30 PM
RE: Reconnecting - by rowens - 09-07-2021, 01:12 AM



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